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Santanfara



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Posted - 06 Jun 2009 :  11:41:11  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message

A poem of mess
Of lasting pain
Symbol of deadly orders
Obedience to self-interest
Of the sacred oats
Tongue slicing
Sudden accidental deaths
So is the system
As the old poet says
‘The system is a fraud’
‘The system is a grave yard’
Stupid sense of patriotism
A misunderstanding of the word
Killing to please for the socall messiah
Why my skull?
Skulls of innocent bystanders
Taken on mere suspicion
For the preservation of might
To continue throne-ing forever
Extinguishing the lights of good men

The Bones of men
To deter the mind of would be threats
Of even thinking about talking, writing and communicating
In dissenting vibes
Oh you the skuller
Day by day, the force of nature stares at you
Wild and bitter
Pointing its venoms
‘The ****** shall have his day’
Under our grip
All the skulls and bones of the innocent
United and ready to take revenge
In the dark cold pit
Surrounded by networks of wild fires
No more aid’s to depend on
Just you the gone skuller, in the face of obscurity
Damn you, you men of twisted souls
By Suntou Bolonba Touray

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com

kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 06 Jun 2009 :  12:23:22  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Suntou Bolonba sabary baaba, the red hue is so stark and scary , your poem speaks from a bleeding heart yet prays for redemption. Some would read this as a prayer from a hate filled heart yet it is your right to wish for change which others would not have happen any way. This is the beauty of democracy , which unfortunately is being stifled in our motherland. Therefore brother I support your stance and wish as you do that this change comes and gives us the release from the savage bondage we have found ourselves in. "Hana simingming nying kello tebayila.....Balangbaa balangbaa, balangkula ! yeah tenkul kung boyindo tebayila.... foroya tinya!" The freeborn will always crave for freedom, those sitting on the nose of others may be enjoying the ride but those whose noses are being blocked and stopped from breathing freely also do have a right to push them off and get the free air.This is natural justice
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Dalton1



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Posted - 06 Jun 2009 :  14:58:35  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
quote:
Just you the gone skuller, in the face of obscurity
Damn you, you men of twisted souls


Nice bashing Suntou! It is very befitting to dictators and their breeds everywhere. It is my believe that mosquetoes won't stop breeding, so are dictators everywhere. When ever you find your self in their traps, remember Ghandi when he noted there will always be dictators and tyrants in this world but their ending shameful.

The color is scary though....remember, your nephew talked about this before, but thanks and i like the poem.

D...

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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Santanfara



3460 Posts

Posted - 07 Jun 2009 :  00:56:06  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message
Thanks Kaani and Mawdo Yero. I respect the two of you most sincerely. Indeed the silent orders mess up innocent people's lives. When the orders are given, it looks like nothing. But when men are taken awa from their wife and children, tortured and then killed, something serious is wrong in our country.
It will end soon though, God willing.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com
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Karamba



United Kingdom
3820 Posts

Posted - 07 Jun 2009 :  01:01:23  Show Profile Send Karamba a Private Message

Santanfara,

You have done a hard blow to brutality on Gambian soil.

How the heartless killers see this, is something else.

Karamba
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Santanfara



3460 Posts

Posted - 08 Jun 2009 :  17:19:08  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message

Good vibe Karamba, the folks killed years ago are now bones and skulls. They are waiting for their killers though. an English poet once said "you can kill me and throw away my bones but one day my bones will ride against you". I wonder how the likes of our killers are able to sleep at night.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com
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