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Sister Omega



United Kingdom
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Posted - 01 Jun 2009 :  19:06:26  Show Profile  Visit Sister Omega's Homepage Send Sister Omega a Private Message
Attayaa’s Blessings

Open up a box of Attayaa
Let’s brew some tea
It’s good you know
To drink it hot
One two and three!

Let me tell you a story
How Attire became a blessing
In a land where people’s words
Get stuck in their throats
And they find it hard to swallow notes
They want to express
The air is filled with repressive silence
Tension seethes beneath the surface.

Attire’s boiling on the stove vibrating rigorously
If someone doesn’t turn the fire off
Either the attire will boil over and kill the fire
Or the Attire evaporates
This is how repression feels
When peoples’ tongues are tied
Yet still they smile wearing masks
To cover up their tears
Wrenching away at their hearts!

Meanwhile Attayaa’s steam intensifies
Atmospheric sedition takes over
Where people live under a cloak of fear and suspicion
They become too afraid to speak their truth
Too afraid to trust anyone
Their throats run dry.

Attayaa’s now ready to quench their thirst
Glasses are rinsed and placed
Onto a tray for the opposing sides
An experienced hand pours Attire
With precision into each glistening glass
Opponents are seated in round table talks
As they each drink Attire
The spiral of tension unravels
Furthermore pent up energy is released
In a controlled manner
The more these fractions discuss
The more a consensus is reached

It’s as a miracle occurred for the first time
In this nation’s history
The people decided unanimously
Freedom of expression
Releases unnecessary tension
Frustration and repression

Just like Attire quenches the thirst
By hydrating and stimulating the mind
Enthusing motivation
Inspiring and aspiring
Progressive development
For all inclusive nation building
After each individual returned to their homes
They reflected on Attire’s blessing
From Our Creator
And gave thanks.



By Sophia Sewell-Njie © 2009

www.sophiasewell-njie.blogspot.com

Peace
Sister Omega

Edited by - Sister Omega on 11 Dec 2009 20:19:25

Moe



USA
2326 Posts

Posted - 02 Jun 2009 :  02:40:54  Show Profile Send Moe a Private Message
There is a reason i don't post much on the poetry forum. Thats one thing am not good at ,but yeah sister O, Your poems are timely ,I enjoyed Frenemy that was good also.

Big-up........................................Peace

I am Jebel Musa better yet rock of Gibraltar,either or,still a stronghold and a Pillar commanding direction

The GPU wants Me Hunted Down for what I don't know .....
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 02 Jun 2009 :  15:10:45  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
I am not sure I am reading you right sister, but this poem is loaded and full of innuendo. At a certain point I can see you post a need for letting as it were a free flow of opinions which if stifled may lead to various acts including sedition . Well done again for bringing this poem on and I once again commend you for writing it. My interpretation may not necessarily be in line with what you had in mind but that is what I digested from a portion of the writing. You have proven once again that you've got talent and I wish to see more of your contributions on the poetry column. "Jajefatti samajigain touch nga yahbe", as Manukumba tells Pa Dacousta on their radio talk show back home in those days of yore.
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Sister Omega



United Kingdom
2085 Posts

Posted - 07 Jun 2009 :  01:00:44  Show Profile  Visit Sister Omega's Homepage Send Sister Omega a Private Message
Thanks Kaanibaa I originally laid down the base of the poem in 2006 called when Words get stuck in People's Throats. I used a lot of metaphors pertaining to kettles. As an attire drinker I decided to reflect on the tea drinking ritual in as much as it is communion of spending time together, where people can talk and relax. As 2006 was tense especially when the Coup plotters where being hunted tension was in the air with a steely silence. Now whilst reflected on those times and developments since then. The process of transitions take time just like Attire takes time to brew, then it takes time to drink three rounds of tea it is nonetheless beneficial after all it quenches your thirst.

Peace

Sister Omega

Peace
Sister Omega

Edited by - Sister Omega on 07 Jun 2009 01:16:13
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