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Dalton1



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Posted - 08 Jun 2009 :  22:11:11  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
Udey of Kusey

Howling little puppy
With sharp carnivorous teeth
And where have you been all this time
When the sky was blue
With promising rains.

Hi "hater" Udey of Kusseh
walking with "two voices"
Like in the poem of “Maya” again
You know, you can go to hell, right?
This bashing is for you
And read with you instinct biting you
And jealousy and hate grinding your vessels
While the rhymes whirl you around, fainting to death
Engaged in the deceit and hate
You’ve been known for over time
and the canon looser who insults his parents
doesn't spare other decent folks.

Howling little puppy
Suffering from rabies
Disrespectful to his parents
And a deceit to his egos
Foaming rabies’ foam
Who lived over time lying, and lying aloud
With a killer instinct
And aggressively supporting tribal egos
Like “Udey of Kussey”
And he will look at his father
And pull his “balls” in the open
In the real show of shadow
And the audience will laugh aloud
But he doesn’t have a direction
So yours in howl is loose.

Be ready to defend your complexity
your tribal agenda
and hate
Because I am ready to deal with your types
And it is called the bashing of “Qisas”
Until I run out of ink
I will continue to suffocate you with
Fine lines of bashing
That will multiply your hate inside you
touching your feelings
while hate eats and grinds inside you
though pretentious that it isn't
but you know you failed woefully
even though your tried
but never a way for you
Till you succumb like Odey of Kusey
again, in the poem of "Maya"
I rise to the skies.

Ha ha ha ha Odeh!

tell me you are death, Mr. 2-voice man . I remember in Gambia, once a dirimo enters a hole, you smoke inside, it sprouts out with eyes, mouth and nose all smoked....watchout at the exit hole, otherwise...it will jump to you. We will all write this history this time around....and I swear by Allah, in whose hands my soul is.

By Dalton


Kusseh of Udey to follow suite! Shiiiit...!

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:

Edited by - Dalton1 on 08 Jun 2009 22:34:15

Moe



USA
2326 Posts

Posted - 08 Jun 2009 :  22:36:16  Show Profile Send Moe a Private Message
Some of ya'll suck at everything including poetry this is a shame to all poets ,lets see how many people love it..

Let me tell you political whores including the undercover hypocrites and parasites ,who for some reason are SCRARED of ME. You know your selves mr "it all goes back to the first sentences" . Damn hypocrites. Runing around kissing arse will not score any of ya'll points here. This is my world and rule it Toubab1020.

And coming back to you Dalton the snitch,Your poetry sucks and i think your professor at University of Gambia should have told you your grammar sucks too. Remember 5 years ago AMY told you that you were trying too hard to be somebody!!!!. She was right look at you guys today. They say "samba Kathy Nakk ,Nduka Kathey Nakk La" you are a gainako if am right ain't that what you told us 5 years ago................................Peace

I am Jebel Musa better yet rock of Gibraltar,either or,still a stronghold and a Pillar commanding direction

The GPU wants Me Hunted Down for what I don't know .....

Edited by - Moe on 09 Jun 2009 00:48:26
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