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kaanibaa



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Posted - 27 Sep 2008 :  00:34:23  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Out in the wild
Youth in their prime
Venture to gain
The weaklings cower
Under the wrappers of their mums
Too afraid to brave the great wide wilderness
Fearing they shall perish
By following suit
Expecting to be always
shielded by dad's presence
My son hear me speak

To prove your worth
You need to grow up
Quit this safe haven of home
And brave the unknown
That way you gain
Stay here and be comforted
For a while
But that's all you get
A little respite
For soon or late
You will have to fend for yourself
Showing your worth

Take a look around boy
You will see strangers passing by
For sure they hail not from around here
Their abodes are far away lands
See them struggle to gain
Whilst the locals loaf around
Soon to see the strangers
Flourish in ways amazing
Earning jealous envy
With pride they walk the streets
Knowing that they have made it
And on their return home
Shall be hailed as worthy

All I see here is youth
Squat in groups here and there
Gossiping endlessly
Whilst sipping tea
All day long
Dreaming wild dreams of success
Which evades them come morning
Heedless to caution
So doom is their lot

Get up my dear
Take a walk
A long walk away from this comfort
Which is surely pulling you to doom
Take this walk
Seeking to be better
That my son is advice you should heed

Santanfara



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Posted - 28 Sep 2008 :  08:07:04  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message
Kaanibaa, interesting message. with an extending hand one is regarded as worthy.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 28 Sep 2008 :  23:42:13  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
your view huh santa......
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