I want to thank Mr. Sankareh for his candid review of my book, and pointing out some of the flaws and shortcomings in the book.
I will take his criticisms into serious consideration and see how the book can be improved in another edition.
Self editing a book of this size can undoubtedly increase the chances of a lot of grammatical errors, and I will employ the services of an editor in my future publications.
Mr Sankareh has made an interesting revelation about one of the characters in the book, who died in the earlier part of the book but reappears again in subsequent chapters. This appears to be the only anomaly besides some grammatical errors which raises a serious structural flaw in the book. I will look into this in another edition of the book.
I will also like to encourage others who read the book to give me their honest opinion. I will challenge myself to make the other books I write much better.
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Posted - 14 Nov 2012 : 18:00:31
