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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 25 Jun 2011 :  16:00:45  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
He sat on his masters laps
On a ride through town
Gazing at other passengers
With a smile on his content face
A joyous companion on a bus ride
Across Babylon

Here the Babylon dogs eat to their fill
Stroll in parks as of right
With a watchful loving master or mistress
Standing guard
None dare touch a lucky doggy
Whose right is guaranteed by law

In another land of a different kind
The people walk in fear
Some eat while other starve in silence
Sad faces masked by a powder-coating of pretence
If they even gesture in seeming defiance
This signals arrests and harrashment
From an evil establishment
Filled with callous sons and daugthers of the soil
Theirs is a sad lot

In contrast the lucky doggy in Babylon
Goes about his daily life
With neither fear nor foe
For these are perils
None existent even in his dreams
So heaven is home to him assured
But in that land of a diferrent clime
The poor folks live theirs in hellbound bonds
Wondering what knife can cut them lose

So lucky doggy in Babylon jives
As he thrives on justice for all
Even animals are so encompassed
But down yonder land
The folks sit under a heavy yoke
Heavy on their shoulders
Threatening to choke
Their sorry breaths
But none dare protest
For fear of an almighty reprisal
From a power so evil
So walk on in sadness
To early graves
Or a dark penitentiary
Which is dubbed a hotel of sorts

toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 25 Jun 2011 :  17:08:02  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
Kaan,This is really good,you are talented,one for the book. (I hope that you are keeping all your poems safely and not on bits of paper or solely on a computer,dates are also important.
What an I talking about ?, its your stuff do as you please nothing to do with any one else

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.

Edited by - toubab1020 on 25 Jun 2011 17:10:57
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kisley



United Kingdom
214 Posts

Posted - 25 Jun 2011 :  19:09:58  Show Profile Send kisley a Private Message
Brilliant.
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kobo



United Kingdom
7765 Posts

Posted - 26 Jun 2011 :  21:56:28  Show Profile Send kobo a Private Message
WHAT A MASTERPIECE AND DESERVED WIDE PUBLICITY

Edited by - kobo on 26 Jun 2011 21:57:02
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 28 Jun 2011 :  22:02:05  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Hey thanks all and I do enjoy peeping in once in a while , the absence though is to fill the pocket , hope to send in more soon. Cheers
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