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sankalanka

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Posted - 22 Apr 2010 :  22:26:33  Show Profile Send sankalanka a Private Message
We gathered at the bantaba
our bleeding souls and dry tears
our wounded pride and scarred image

And talked about all the things we know
the things we know not what to do
and we sang all our redemption songs
songs we know not how to relive and to dance.

Our voices disjointed and weary
drowned in the tumultuous drumbeat
of the dancing and masquarading
the joyful merriment and praise singing
that humored the king in his majestic palace.

We gathered at the bantaba
our scribes and scholars
our poets and philosophers
and we analyzed
and we scrutinized
and we dissected
our anger, our frustration and our emptiness

And we talked about all the things we know
the things we know not what to do
and we sang all our redemption songs
songs we know not how to relive and to dance.

From the thatched huts
in the secluded green pastures of Sari Yoro
to the swampy rice in the rain-drenched
fields of Sapu and Mansakonko

Our voices disjointed and weary
drowned in the tumultuous drumbeat
of the dancing and masquarading
the joyful merriment and praise singing
that humored the king in his majestic palace.

Rene

Momodou



Denmark
11723 Posts

Posted - 23 Apr 2010 :  14:55:00  Show Profile Send Momodou a Private Message
A typical Bantaba where everything in the community is discussed celebrated and moaned.

Thanks for the poem!

A clear conscience fears no accusation - proverb from Sierra Leone
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toubab1020



12311 Posts

Posted - 23 Apr 2010 :  15:56:39  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
There was no mention of politicians attending the Bantaba in the poem,oh dear, were they not invited by the people ?
Good poem though

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 23 Apr 2010 :  18:46:26  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
As usual you have come again with a very good poem for me , I simply like your style . Well done Rene.
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