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Santanfara



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Posted - 21 Apr 2009 :  20:33:56  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message


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With hopes of Tsunami tears
The waves will carry you aloft to the shore
Of the thousand toners inked to papers
The many fingers glued to the keyboard
Hundreds of pictured stories published worldwide
Still no trace of you
A mother's cry tear the earth asunder
A father unrelentingly searching for his son
Revolving around the devil's throne
Covertly sealing you from even
The most sophisticated "nano-scope" to detect any DNA
From the world's largest cities
To the most tiny hamlet
Questions asked in million forms
Of the many few
where could you be?
Who is hiding you?
What have you done?
Million answers remain
Of the best we've so far, Chief
You gone without trace
Leaving us with the greatest perception
That the bottom of the ladder is crowded
Those at higher end sees it all and knows it all.

By Aisha Saidy, Boston, MA.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com

Dalton1



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Posted - 23 Apr 2009 :  19:28:29  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
another nice one from Aisha and keep them coming...

thanks for your forward Suntou.


D...

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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Dalton1



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Posted - 24 Apr 2009 :  19:39:56  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
Hi Suntoumana,

You know very well Aisha's mortar and pestles makes louder echoes. Without any guessing or engaging the brain so hard, i bet my dinner today, this poem must be talking about Chief E. Manneh, or someone in similar situations. It is very emotional....

D...

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
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Posted - 26 Apr 2009 :  22:45:47  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Chief and many others who in mysterious ways disappeared and those who made them are playing games with us saying we do not have them etc. This is a beautiful poem and sister Aisha is an ace writer , kudos to her again.
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Santanfara



3460 Posts

Posted - 01 May 2009 :  04:53:34  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message
quote:
Originally posted by Dalton1

Hi Suntoumana,

You know very well Aisha's mortar and pestles makes louder echoes. Without any guessing or engaging the brain so hard, i bet my dinner today, this poem must be talking about Chief E. Manneh, or someone in similar situations. It is very emotional....

D...


Mowdo, you are the master. The sister has a sharp mind, it may about the conditions of love ones missing all other the place. a particuler reference could on E.Manneh. Thanks Dalton.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com
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