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MADIBA



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Posted - 11 Jun 2008 :  14:08:11  Show Profile Send MADIBA a Private Message
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Originally posted by kaanibaa

Guys I am so glad so thanks ,and so.....say
See me now
with hairs standing
Like on fire
Burning yeah burning
Just because you tickle my ego
Heaping platitudes on my plate
Eat I shall
But you shall join me
On that feisty day
I shall drink a toast
To Anna most beautiful
To Kay our Lion hearted pal
To Madiss the Frenchman we say merci
And most of all to Momodou the Torch bearer
I say thank you all





Hear Hear
See who is singing the song of humility
The one of many names
Gilleh, Kaanibudeja , fulful
Or Kaanibaa
Kaanibaa until now unknown
Sitting in the middle of the bowl
Waiting for the one who dares
Aaah the cry of painful joy
The hot juice until now safely inside
Has hit the salivary glands of the diners

The lips close in to put out the fire in the mouth
Usssssssssssh ussssssssssssssh,
The cool air breezes in to coolly land on the embers

The diners shall still ask for more of the cool hot juice

Kaanibaa the diners want more
Give them more
Surely ur lines are not
Lines of the rolling rumbling rum ‘rum

madiss

Edited by - MADIBA on 11 Jun 2008 14:15:16
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 11 Jun 2008 :  14:29:33  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Madiss come on now! You are spicing me up .Hot chilly pepper , added to Akara balls on a hot sunny day by the beach wow goreh waye !Albarkah mawdo!You know this is not for people with soft bellies or else they suffer Banjul Belly, you do remember that don'y you bro?Nice poem .Obrigado Amigo
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