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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 29 May 2008 : 17:39:19
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FREEDOM
You tried to harness my urge
Offending me greatly by your
Utter disregard for my stress
Donkeys do have feelings
Only you do not care
Needlessly beating me
Thankless brute that you are
Only if you but knew
What goes on in my mind as you
Needlessly brutalize me
Master, you want me
Enduring in silence and so I stay mute
You don't own me
Only in your crazed mind is that true
Unkind and so blind
Can you for a moment
Allow your brain to think about
Nature favoring you this way
Offering you a chance to be great,but
Naively you chose to hurt and be so
Low and so heartless
You thus betray the trust
Being yourself
Evil and so harmful to all
Your time will come
On the dot without fail
Until then do what you will
Retributive justice shall come to you
Save till then in your cocoon
Enjoying your sadistic bent
Lent to you is the measured time
Finally you shall cease to be master
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Santanfara
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Posted - 30 May 2008 : 20:10:11
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| interesting bro. keep it up. |
Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
1169 Posts |
Posted - 30 May 2008 : 23:46:59
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| Thanks santanfara, the encouragement is like loppy juice for me . My next poem will be about Loppy juice, that wonder juice that can make my dream lady grow a big 'wang' |
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
1169 Posts |
Posted - 03 Jun 2008 : 09:44:35
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| I tried to write a message here , please read the first letters of each sentence and see what i wrote.Perhaps some one could decode my message and join my fun. I do not know what this style is called though . |
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kayjatta
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Posted - 03 Jun 2008 : 09:50:57
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| "You don't own me, you can only be yourself". I don't know what style you are using either, but perhaps that is part of the beauty of poetry. Poetry can be pretty much like sculpture, only that you construct with words and the possible combinations can be endless... |
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
1169 Posts |
Posted - 03 Jun 2008 : 10:03:04
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| Thats just it Kayjata, exactly what i thought too. You so swiftly got there ,great man! My respects brother. |
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