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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 21 May 2008 :  19:49:09  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Laughtalgia

I am so sad
Missing the laugh
Feeling so mad
At the taunts you shout
Me so low
As you send blow after blow
At my weakness you horror
Caring little for my sorrow
Send me some if you have any
I can pay you a penny
Or more,to laugh
A sport I miss so much
Like a school day lunch
Missed as others munch
Making sounds some fluid others crunch
Oh share your laugh
If you but me love
Beautiful laugh
Is what I lack
See me walking the walk
Like a zombie I hear you talk
Disconnected I missed your joke
Searching in vain for joy
To make me laugh
As I used to laugh

Edited by - kaanibaa on 21 May 2008 19:52:19

toubab1020



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Posted - 21 May 2008 :  19:52:14  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
Nice, understand the words is it about unrequited love or someone who has gone away? or just a poem, anyway very good.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 21 May 2008 :  19:55:55  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Toubab
Thanks for the comment, I some times just write as if urged on and any topic at this time would do.Lets see how others find it and what meaning they attach there to.
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