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gambiabev
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 Posted - 28 Oct 2006 : 14:04:40
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I have nothing against the CONTENT of the poem, I just dont like the style. That is just my personal opinion, in the same way as I like some music styles more than others and some artists more than others.
I think poetry can be beautiful, emotionally moving and thought provoking. It can be quite a self indulgent art form too. It expresses something very personal and for many many people it is the writing process that has some form of self healing. PUBLISHING: how many copies? which countries? to me that isnt important. Poetry has a value in itself and doesnt need to be justified.
Sister Omega I hope you continue with your poetry as a form of self expression. You dont have to justify it to anyone. BUT if it is in the public domain I do reserve the right to critise it. |
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LEMON TIME
Afghanistan
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Posted - 28 Oct 2006 : 20:42:32
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| STOP critising and start encouraging Bev. |
There is no god but Allah |
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Cornelius
Sweden
1051 Posts |
Posted - 29 Oct 2006 : 10:14:39
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| tell-o-her bro Borat..... ( by the way you will soon be meeting the unprovoked, uncensored, unrestrained, Zaddik Isaac, because I've got my own, MY OWN blog!!!!! Ya Ali! |
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LEMON TIME
Afghanistan
1295 Posts |
Posted - 30 Oct 2006 : 01:39:38
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| Cornelius are u pissed(drunk) |
There is no god but Allah |
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mbay
Germany
1007 Posts |
Posted - 30 Oct 2006 : 14:59:10
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| IT SEEMS VERY INTERESTED&OUTSPOKEN POEM FROM SIS O: IS THERE ANWAY OF REACHING IT? |
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kiwi
Sweden
662 Posts |
Posted - 01 Nov 2006 : 14:06:20
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I have, at long last, studied Sister Omegaīs poem several times, trying to forget who wrote it. Reading it through creates a lot of images, it also has attractive rhythmical halts and draws a line from the past up to today. A poem well worth reading.
If Sister Omega reprints her book, I would be interested in buying it.
Daltons poem, to me, referes to jali (gawlo?) tradition - the mentioning of a personīs name, and the repetition.
(I might be completely wrong.) Also an enjoyable poem.
Why donīt we/you all start writing poems and send them on the Bantaba? Not to be criticized, just for enjoying the variety of expressions. The subject could be chosen in advance, we will see what comes out. One subject could be adoption.
Kotu Beach 1995 by Kiwi01
Here is the picture, thanks for help. |
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Edited by - kiwi on 02 Nov 2006 13:13:01 |
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Cornelius
Sweden
1051 Posts |
Posted - 01 Nov 2006 : 14:55:25
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| Odetta and you should set it to mellow d |
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Sister Omega
United Kingdom
2085 Posts |
Posted - 02 Nov 2006 : 18:44:27
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Kiwi01,I'm glad my poem has inspired you to send in you photo of Kotu's fishermen. Thank you for sending it into to share with and for your positive comments about my poem.
Peace
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LEMON TIME
Afghanistan
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jambo
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Posted - 07 Nov 2006 : 18:48:39
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| oY LEMONTIME, PLEASE VISIT THE TRAVEL FORUM |
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Sister Omega
United Kingdom
2085 Posts |
Posted - 08 Nov 2006 : 17:39:35
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Lemon Time, Thanx for your contribution you hit the exact locations which inspired me to write West African Atlantic Ocean.
Peace Sister Omega |
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Cornelius
Sweden
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Posted - 08 Nov 2006 : 18:18:15
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Originally posted by LEMON TIME
Cornelius are u pissed(drunk)
About having my own blog?
Hell no, but you might get dizzy just reading it......
( It's called " OUR CHALLENGE" |
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