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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
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Posted - 07 Jul 2012 :  13:04:53  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Socialists crying for blood
In the village square
Little children in a game of cruelty
Play the hard ball game
Hitting all and sundry in the fray
Some cry in shameless hurt
While others laugh with gleefull joy
On the sidelines elders sit and watch
Shaking their grey heads of wisdom
Memories of the days gone back
Smearing the scenes on display
Yet they knew it's no fair game for all at all

The keeper gets to throw
Hitting any he chose
Hard or hardest is his choice
Hurting and caring not a hoot
For that game is meant to hurt
All and sundry in the square
Till the weak run away hurt, bruised and in shame
To return another day again to play
Hoping to be a victor and not the victim
The chances of which are never guaranteed

In the village square
Sosolasso is not socialism
It's a game of cruelty
Controlled and fueled by the need to hurt
Compassion having no place or say at all
The hardened skins of the kids out play
Have never thought of bullies in town
They contend with hard hurtling balls of their mates
Then scramble to have a hold of the same
Wherewith they too can cause some pain
A vicious cycle that never ends till the end of the game
With no referee or umpire to judge
Sosolasso the game of kids ;so cruel
But no one tells them kids to stop
Because it is and has always been
A game of kids in the square
From time immemorial

Edited by - kaanibaa on 07 Jul 2012 19:46:50

Karamba



United Kingdom
3820 Posts

Posted - 07 Jul 2012 :  14:53:10  Show Profile Send Karamba a Private Message
Kaanibaa, how much is this spicy dish on your hot menu? So, so, good ! You have done it again and again. This is one out of the best. Can't stop reading it.

Karamba
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toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 07 Jul 2012 :  15:08:29  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
Agreed, another one for the book,I hope you are keeping a written note of all this work is in some sort of book and not just on sheets of paper ! Very good again.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.

Edited by - toubab1020 on 07 Jul 2012 15:09:25
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 07 Jul 2012 :  19:51:26  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Thanks bro T and Karamba it is a great joy for me to write i am hopeful that i get some attention via this medium even if it is minuite , that is a mark on my sleeve . I still have not mustered enough courage to set my ramblings in book form perhaps I never would but as they get read here that might suffice .
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toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 07 Jul 2012 :  20:04:00  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
Kaan.Please, keep them all together then in date order on your pieces of paper
Attention to your work is well deserved.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.

Edited by - toubab1020 on 07 Jul 2012 20:04:48
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