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| kaanibaa |
Posted - 26 Jul 2014 : 03:42:31
Man ! as you walk the lonely path
Searching for something not knowing what
Looking here and there for that something everywhere
Since you know not what you search
How could you find it here, there or any where ?
Confused in the midst of understanding folks
Who only wait just for you to ask
But you plod on past them with pride oh so foolish
Till you tumble down in a heap of misery
For to be guided one needs to heed
To understand one needs to discern
To see one needs to look inside and outside too
This haughty arrogance of yours will trip you up
Falling down severally and until you change your ways
One fall too many will be your end
A wasted life of golden opportunities
If only you took time to look inside. |
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| kaanibaa |
Posted - 30 Jul 2014 : 05:30:16
Thanks every one , indeed too many blind folks around and they have none to blame but themselves for their misery. Those without eyes use the senses available to them to move from place to place and do that very well given their plight, whereas those with gifts of good eyes refuse to use them preferring to shut them and grope in bright light. Erm just saying .......... |
| Momodou |
Posted - 26 Jul 2014 : 22:41:13
Thank you Kaaniba. True! |
| toubab1020 |
Posted - 26 Jul 2014 : 12:43:20
Lovely a thought provoking poem,quite sad really.Thanks. |
| kobo |
Posted - 26 Jul 2014 : 03:45:05
Excellence and another masterpiece!
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