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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
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Posted - 26 Jul 2014 :  03:42:31  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Man ! as you walk the lonely path
Searching for something not knowing what
Looking here and there for that something everywhere
Since you know not what you search
How could you find it here, there or any where ?
Confused in the midst of understanding folks
Who only wait just for you to ask
But you plod on past them with pride oh so foolish
Till you tumble down in a heap of misery
For to be guided one needs to heed
To understand one needs to discern
To see one needs to look inside and outside too
This haughty arrogance of yours will trip you up
Falling down severally and until you change your ways
One fall too many will be your end
A wasted life of golden opportunities
If only you took time to look inside.

kobo



United Kingdom
7765 Posts

Posted - 26 Jul 2014 :  03:45:05  Show Profile Send kobo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Excellence and another masterpiece!

Edited by - kobo on 26 Jul 2014 03:49:27
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toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 26 Jul 2014 :  12:43:20  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Lovely a thought provoking poem,quite sad really.Thanks.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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Momodou



Denmark
11634 Posts

Posted - 26 Jul 2014 :  22:41:13  Show Profile Send Momodou a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thank you Kaaniba. True!

A clear conscience fears no accusation - proverb from Sierra Leone
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 30 Jul 2014 :  05:30:16  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thanks every one , indeed too many blind folks around and they have none to blame but themselves for their misery. Those without eyes use the senses available to them to move from place to place and do that very well given their plight, whereas those with gifts of good eyes refuse to use them preferring to shut them and grope in bright light. Erm just saying ..........
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