I equally look forward to such a day -in all honesty.
Indeed a poem restoring lost hope. I enjoyed reading this poem, and my eyes don't want to part with the bashings of the lines. Some of the words accidentally happens to be my choice of words in poetry bashing as well, and most of the words I used several times in other poems. Simply, beautiful!
"Where the beauty of the Lord Shines on the distant skies"
then
"The light of dawn Shatters the darkness"
and finally
"To a bright new day Hope’s silver teeth twinkle On Sweet Morning’s face"
We've engulfed in this darkness such that hope has been lost; the wounds has been deepened; and the struggle has been slippery. The answer to all these problems is "Majestic Dawn". amen.
yj
"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
May this beautiful dream which is a prayer too come true for us, surely every cloud has a silver lining and hopefully we are about the see the light at the end of this dark horrid tunnel. Let us not give up hope for indeed there is a great need for that to be sustained , a hopeless nation poised on the brink of collapse needs loads to survive. May Allah save our souls and let us remain alive to witness that beautiful dawn ameeeeeeen .
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