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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
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Posted - 17 Aug 2008 :  20:25:07  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
I sail on the winds
Floating down the hills
Wild screams oozing from me
Ecstacy of the moods
That swell in my heart
As I move to meet
The love of my life
Make me go dizzy excited
Pray dearest darling
That we meet as promised
Under the canopies of the mango trees
There we can kiss as never before
Hugging each other breathless
And oblivious to whoever watches
As we together cement our love
Cupid where ever you are
Please send out your bows
Striking us in the heart
Me and my dearest partner
Sealing the bonds of eternal love
When we can declare to the world
The discovery of one another
Me and my dearest partner
Oh joyous moment
That stopped time forever
For me and for her


Edited by - kaanibaa on 17 Aug 2008 20:25:49

Dalton1



3485 Posts

Posted - 21 Aug 2008 :  14:27:46  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
Nice love poem!

It couldn't be put any better.

For whoever the poem was written for, ps. include me in that love package.

Dalton

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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mbay

Germany
1007 Posts

Posted - 21 Aug 2008 :  14:52:39  Show Profile Send mbay a Private Message
thanks bo.
Yes love, Only you can conquers.
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 21 Aug 2008 :  17:43:53  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Thanks bro Dalton and Mbay, you know what the old Africans say ; it helps if people clap when the drummer beats the drum as they compliment each other and maximizes the ambiance.The two combined creates the climate which leads to singing and the climactic dance .So by your encouraging words I get the urge to try more and who knows one day I can be a better poet.Jerre len jeff ,albarka .

Edited by - kaanibaa on 21 Aug 2008 17:45:21
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