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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 07 Nov 2011 : 20:07:22
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Heave ho the pullers pull
So strong they mass their strengths
Watching the mess they create on the mossy grass
Is the hopeless throng of the hopeful mass
Waiting to see an end of a wasteful quest
Who wins is without doubt
Set if you like in bold bloody print
On the crying walls
Lining the route
From Jallanbang to jallanbereh
Hungry greedy urchins chase
The cruel wheels from which are crumbs flung
Aside the dumb opponents
Grapple with the useless rope
Trying to win control
But the crazed incumbent
Rides pass the post even before
The start of the race
Leaving all with mouths agape
We knew it! was we can say
So fall back to our broken dreams beds
To chase the mares of the night
Perhaps we are the fools
Who fail to see the light
Which came to brighten the path
And it has since moved along
To other climes who perhaps
Would use it as required
From Jallanbang to Jallanbereh
The route stay lined with folks
Whose dreams were dashed by greed
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Dalton1
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Posted - 07 Nov 2011 : 20:32:07
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Thanks Bro Kani, and I like the poems. They are very unique, styled, carry a message and original. keep them coming...
Kind Regards & happy eid,
Yero |
"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
1169 Posts |
Posted - 07 Nov 2011 : 20:51:30
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| Thanks bro Dalton posts appreciated have a wonderful Eid |
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Momodou
Denmark
11644 Posts |
Posted - 07 Nov 2011 : 21:00:56
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Thank you kaani. Me too like the poem.
Happy Eid to you. |
A clear conscience fears no accusation - proverb from Sierra Leone |
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toubab1020
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Posted - 07 Nov 2011 : 21:30:13
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| Thanks for coming back Kaan. I know Karamba and I have missed your input here,have a great time. |
"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
1169 Posts |
Posted - 08 Nov 2011 : 08:38:31
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Thanks momodou and toubab happy Eid to every one on bantaba too |
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Santanfara
3460 Posts |
Posted - 19 Nov 2011 : 22:27:14
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| Excellent words Kaani. Enjoyable. |
Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran
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kondorong
Gambia
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Posted - 24 Nov 2011 : 22:45:02
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kaaniba
Why from jallanbang to jallanbereh? (LOL) what about Yorro Bawol |
“When I despair, I remember that all through history the way of truth and love have always won. There have been tyrants and murderers, and for a time, they can seem invincible, but in the end, they always fall. Think of it--always.” |
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kondorong
Gambia
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Posted - 24 Nov 2011 : 22:49:18
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| It is held by some that the poor are a necessary furniture of the earth's gymnasium where the rich could practice virtue if they so wish. Like the poem. Its full of wisdom |
“When I despair, I remember that all through history the way of truth and love have always won. There have been tyrants and murderers, and for a time, they can seem invincible, but in the end, they always fall. Think of it--always.” |
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