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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 10 Jul 2011 : 21:59:45
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These eyes which belong to me
Where gifts from a lord so merciful
With them I look and see
And what I see through these eyes
Is seen free without fees
So who then can say what
I can or cannot see
These ears which belong to I
Where gifts from a lord so bountiful
With them I hear things
And what I hear through these ears
Are mines to use
Who then can say
What I can do or not with them
This brain which I bear up here
Was a gift so special from my lord
That I use to think and decipher
All at my own time and will
Who then can decide
What I think or not think about
This mouth which is solely mines
Gifted to my person as of right
Has a passage so free
To be used by me as I chose
Who then can stop my use or otherwise of it
As long as I live
I shall use those gifts of mines
My eyes,ears ,brain and mouth
As I deem fit
If it hurts any one so
That is no concern of mine
So long as I don't tresspass their rights
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toubab1020
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Posted - 10 Jul 2011 : 23:44:02
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| Another very good one Kaan. a poem full of thought and the gifts that we have been given,can be understood by everyone even if their faiths and beliefs are not the same,put all your stuff in a writing book written in your own hand,seriously try to record and date your work like that,so that future generations can know about it and read it in relation to the time when it was written,just a suggestion only,think about it . |
"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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Santanfara
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Posted - 20 Jul 2011 : 18:46:26
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| An absoulute deep thinking poem. Thanks bro. |
Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran
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kaanibaa
United Kingdom
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Posted - 22 Jul 2011 : 18:35:24
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| Thanks brothers for your inspiring words and every one of them is being seriously taken in as of now. I hope one day to come out with a collection for what it is worth. |
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toubab1020
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Posted - 22 Jul 2011 : 19:36:38
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Kaan, of course you will,only you can find all those bits of paper that you seized when you were inspired to write your poems
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Originally posted by kaanibaa
Thanks brothers for your inspiring words and every one of them is being seriously taken in as of now. I hope one day to come out with a collection for what it is worth.
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"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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