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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
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Posted - 20 Jan 2011 :  14:57:21  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
The lump jutting affront
Oozing filth unabated
The stench of which assail
The creature comforts of all
Safe those who chose to pretend
Yes safe as in saving the skin
That putrid smell cannot be masked
But some would call that a natural scent
As that of a rose
Harken to the hypocrites !


Trail the tacit endorsements
Sat on their pedestals
With bare bottoms
In false pretence
Making claims to nonchalance
While in private
Shimmer with fury
Knowing all laugh at their folly

A day will come sooner
Than they expect
Exposing their sordid acts
That would be a fine day
For the wicked
To lick the wounds
Of aggression
Their snouts squeezed
Like those of slain pigs
Ready for the roast pot

Candidates abound as
The search ends
Chosen are the ones
Set to shine
The defaulters
Named and shamed
Shall with lowered heads
Face the music of revenge
Or will it be a mere telling-off
Whatever it is
Is what is should be

Until that day
We shall know no peace
We shall see no justice
But confidence in the face
Of adverse motions
Will lead us on to that day













Edited by - kaanibaa on 27 Mar 2011 03:51:29

toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 20 Jan 2011 :  15:20:04  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message
Thanks for the poem.
I can understand and visulise all the thoughts that have passed through your mind when writing it.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 20 Jan 2011 :  19:05:52  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Ah ha Toubab you dig it then hah !Thats cool, happy new year by the way , I was too bzzzzzzzy working the hours to go online , feels good to be back yes man, Thanks
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toubab1020



12306 Posts

Posted - 20 Jan 2011 :  23:39:53  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message


Happy New Year to you too,not much has changed here, the politicos are still at it,no result,I wonder if they understood your poem

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Originally posted by kaanibaa

Ah ha Toubab you dig it then hah !Thats cool, happy new year by the way , I was too bzzzzzzzy working the hours to go online , feels good to be back yes man, Thanks


"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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Dalton1



3485 Posts

Posted - 22 Jan 2011 :  23:08:55  Show Profile  Visit Dalton1's Homepage Send Dalton1 a Private Message
Nice one bro Kani. Good to see your lines again.

Thanks

"There is no god but Allah (SWT); and Muhammad (SAW)is His last messenger." shahadah. Fear & Worship Allah (SWT) Alone! (:
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Santanfara



3460 Posts

Posted - 23 Jan 2011 :  12:25:08  Show Profile  Visit Santanfara's Homepage Send Santanfara a Private Message
Kaani, salute. This one is a razor broom. It shall all come to pass. Every dark cloud have a silver lining. Evil perpetrators wish to polute every single soul. But we say no and we care. Excellent.

Surah- Ar-Rum 30-22
"And among His signs is the creation of heavens and the earth, and the difference of your languages and colours. verily, in that are indeed signs for men of sound knowledge." Qu'ran

www.suntoumana.blogspot.com
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 25 Jan 2011 :  22:13:46  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Thanks Brothers Dalton and Santanfara indeed I was absent due to pressures of work eh! chasing the pound ain't easy but once in a while we shall make an appearance here and for those of you active guys keep it up, one day you will smile.
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Momodou



Denmark
11645 Posts

Posted - 25 Jan 2011 :  22:18:16  Show Profile Send Momodou a Private Message
Thanks for sharing another excellent poem. Best regards!

A clear conscience fears no accusation - proverb from Sierra Leone
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 27 Jan 2011 :  13:57:57  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Thanks brother I miss you too but mind is always on you especially when we last spoke am okay thanks to Allah
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